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General => Common Topic Symposium => Topic started by: NFY on April 9, 2006 03:54 am CDT

Title: my poem
Post by: NFY on April 9, 2006 03:54 am CDT
forgotten,
lost,
crying in my heart,
blood,
death.
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Post by: NFY on April 9, 2006 03:55 am CDT
comments welcome...especially from koro lool

edit:  :(
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Post by: KoRo on April 9, 2006 08:01 am CDT
lawl emo lawl lawl
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Post by: Lidge Farkley on April 9, 2006 08:30 am CDT
Your avatar is more entertaining.
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Post by: Darwin on April 9, 2006 08:43 pm CDT
Heres mine

Went to the show
Cried til the tears were gone
She has left my soul
Stabbed with stilletto shoes
Stab stab stabby stab
Rained down on a burned ocra shell leaf
Drenched in the blood of the tree frogs heart
Hear my whispers
Screaming infidelities
Mom called me a fag
End
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Post by: KoRo on April 9, 2006 09:32 pm CDT
lol emo

alphabet

A is for Alone
B is for Bracelets
C is for Crying
D is for Dyed Black Hair
E is for Emotion
F is for Floorpunch
G is for Glasses
H is for Heartbreak
I is for Intense Pain
J is for Jilted Lover
K is for Kissing
L is for Labeling Yourself
M is for Mood Swings
N is for Never
O is for Old Man pants
P is for "Picked last in gym class"
Q is for Questioning
R is for Remembering
S is for Sweaters
T is for Thrift Stores
U is for Underdeveloped Muscles
V is for Veganism
W is for Wining
X is for X-Girlfriend
Y is for Your (Miserable Existence)
Z is for Zooming (In with your camera, because you're a photographer)
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Post by: NFY on April 9, 2006 09:43 pm CDT
*whining
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Post by: Newbie on April 9, 2006 10:17 pm CDT
Koro, weren't you like super emo just the other day?
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Post by: Particle on April 9, 2006 10:39 pm CDT
I'm about as emo as a terminator, myself.
Title: Re: my poem
Post by: Jim on April 10, 2006 02:11 am CDT
:roll:
Title: Re: my poem
Post by: Jim on April 10, 2006 02:11 am CDT
Quote from: "NFY"
forgotten,
lost,
crying in my heart,
blood,
death.



youre an emo mutha fucker tha fuck is your problem you fag ass pussy niggga? :roll:[/code]
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Post by: KoRo on April 10, 2006 02:28 am CDT
here's mine


Heartbroken
all alone in the night
dispair as my guide
the rain pours
like tears of blood
pain, intense pain
death is release
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Post by: Artorius on April 10, 2006 09:05 am CDT
NFY is funny.
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Post by: ChineseNeil on April 10, 2006 11:51 am CDT
here's my 2 cents

1. NFY is a faggot.
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Post by: NFY on April 10, 2006 02:46 pm CDT
well mr. wang, at least mine is bigger
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Post by: Newbie on April 10, 2006 03:58 pm CDT
2 cents is about all Mr.smallwang has to offer, haha..  :lol:

And Jim, I think this one went over your head..  you didn't seem to catch on to the sarcasm; but that's ok, it make this thread all the more amusing. lol
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Post by: Jeenyus on April 10, 2006 09:00 pm CDT
Quote from: "NFY"
well mr. wang, at least mine is bigger

LOL
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Post by: Razore on April 11, 2006 02:07 am CDT
my dreams are apocalyptic
the sky is ashes
i am falling
darkness
blood
death
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Post by: NFY on April 11, 2006 02:11 am CDT
blood and death were already covered you assbag.

the ultimate emo poem:

japanese,
I am not.

-razore
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Post by: Razore on April 12, 2006 05:07 am CDT
I like how you all like to insult my interest in Japanese culture, the funny thing is it doesn't bother me at all...
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Post by: BeefWellington on April 12, 2006 03:39 pm CDT
I like this thread because it's a bunch of emo chumps and chink wankers.
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Post by: Lidge Farkley on April 12, 2006 11:23 pm CDT
Quote from: "Particle"
I'm about as emo as a terminator, myself.

 :-(
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Post by: Particle on April 12, 2006 11:56 pm CDT
Isn't the acknowledged opposite of emo "terminator"?
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Post by: 12Stones on April 13, 2006 02:52 am CDT
When all you have is the feeling of regret
when knowing you lost is all that you get,

When knowing what you said is what you want to forget..
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Post by: Particle on April 13, 2006 11:23 am CDT
It's time for some dust and the wind's blowing north
Spawning in a second near the rocks by the door
The second bomb site first and get away from the cars
Cuz they ain't got protection from the Islams and SARS
Better yet, try n' reload when your time's out of sand
Becauze you'll get about half way until you're found by a man
Who's peeking 'round the corner after an hour of null
And you can bet your forking ass that his AK is full.
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Post by: Newbie on April 13, 2006 01:15 pm CDT
Hahah, that's classic.. did you really write that?
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Post by: Particle on April 13, 2006 04:19 pm CDT
It's a slightly modified version of the first verse from a song about counter-strike I wrote years ago.  I changed a few phrases to make it seem more consistant with an out-of-song context.  The song version is as follows:

It's time for some Dust and the wind's blowing north
Spawning at the 2nd near the rocks by the door
The second bomb site first and get away from the cars
Cuz they ain't got protection from the Islams and SARS
Better yet, try 'n reload when the time hits the fan
Because you'll get about half way until you're found by the man
He's peeking 'round the corner after an hour of null
And you can bet your forking ass that his AK is full


It's time for some Dust and the wind's blowing north
Dust as in de_dust

Spawning at the 2nd near the rocks by the door
de_dust2 in this case, spawning at CT--rocks are right across from the door (sniper alley) if you leave the spawn area toward the B bomb site

The second bomb site first and get away from the cars
reference from previous line--going toward B; there were also cars introducted in the source version of dust and dust2

Cuz they ain't got protection from the Islams and SARS
the new cars that appeared in the source versions provided little protection to begin with...additionally, the big SARS breakout started when I was writing this so I referenced it

Better yet, try 'n reload when the time hits the fan
it seems like I'm always trying to reload when somebody finds me, so I can't shoot back; "time hits the fan" is a combination of two phrases--"malarkey hits the fan" and "out of time"

Because you'll get about half way until you're found by the man
Seems like I would always be found by somebody half way through reloading my magazine.

He's peeking 'round the corner after an hour of null
Reference to above event--I'd be sitting somewhere for a minute or two and finally decide to reload (didn't want to be left without a gun when I needed it).  Inevitably, that's when somebody always emerges.

And you can bet your forking ass that his AK is full
I might be out of ammo, but they never are.  heh



It's slightly different.

Rest of the song:
Take a bullet in my leg like it's made up of wood
Doin' a specific amount of damage that I know it should
Health-o-Meter takes a dive, a bullet later I respond
But it's all about first shot, unlike in Day with a garand
You'd think an auto weapon'd be quick to make a kill
But your loser teammates don't when they block your shots till
They finally get mowed down like the losers that they are
But while they fall, they take no damage and you take it all

Quick Explanation:
Seems like the weapons always inflict the same damage, eg an AK does 25-30, a 552 does 30-40, etc.  When you get shot at and your health starts dropping, even if you only start firing one bullet after they do, you're pretty much garanteed to lose out.  It only takes 4 rounds from normal weapons.  In Day of Defeat, all that matters with the primary rifles is hitting somebody...they go down.  In here, you have to worry about getting the first shot or you're screwed.  Sometimes it takes forever for an assault rifle to kill somebody, too.  People can fire 50 rounds at each other and only make three hits some times.  Inevitably on a FF=on server, there's always teammates standing between you and the enemy blocking your fire.  Since those nublets always die, when they get killed and start falling your view is still obscured, but the other guy who was attacking is still firing bullets (which go right through dead people and hit you for full damage).

A new round starts and I buy as it begins
The dumb nubs chattin', oblivious to prior sins
We take a new route to try another way
Into the enemy base, plant a bomb, and run away
I take the left hall to sneak around the back
Emerged just in time to run into a pack
And one thing's for sure, I had the element of surprise
Cocked the gun and mowed 'em down, a look of horror in their eyes

Quick Explanation:
After the last two verses, it's a new round.  The nublets are chatting "OMG PWN" and other bullmalarkey, while experienced players (like the person who's viewpoint makes this entire song) are buying based on the previous round and thinking.  Some times you can talk nubs into going a new route after they've all died going the same way 35 rounds in a row.  So, everybody goes a new route, gets into the enemy base (A site), plants, and runs when the timer starts getting low.  In the mean time, the main player has snuck around the back of the main playing area and emerges behind where the CTs are rushing in to defuse the bomb.  Nobody sees him, so he unloads while they're all pointing the other direction and mows them down.  This verse takes place in de_dust from the perspective of a terrorist.  Start in T spawn, go through underpass, go into CT spawn, plant, main guy takes that back hallway to the center part of the map, runs in behind the CTs that are running to defuse the bomb, and finally gets them.
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Post by: NFY on April 13, 2006 05:03 pm CDT
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Post by: Particle on April 13, 2006 06:11 pm CDT
Quote from: "NFY"
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He asked.  Blame him.
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Post by: NFY on April 13, 2006 08:01 pm CDT
wtf is wrong with you newbie? jesus christ if you weren't so cute I'd really be mad at you
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Post by: Vi on April 14, 2006 01:08 pm CDT
Quote from: "Razore"
I like how you all like to insult my interest in Japanese culture, the funny thing is it doesn't bother me at all...

Trade me countries.
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Post by: Newbie on April 14, 2006 05:12 pm CDT
Sorry Particle, I was talking about 12stones' little verse...    haha,  just kidding..  But yeah, you should submit that to the CS forums or somethin, lol.

I can totally relate with always getting shot while reloading, it's so frustrating.




NFY are you male or female?
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Post by: Vi on April 14, 2006 11:17 pm CDT
He's a hawt canadian unsavory woman.
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Post by: Dirk on April 14, 2006 11:38 pm CDT
NFY is pure sex.